supei's Digi-ImagingXperience

- Changes made: Basically took in the suggestions about the eyes, and making the pliers more visible but yet maintain the focus on the mouth. So I layered and mask the mouth area and chose a deep blood red for the lips to keep the audiences' focus on the mouth while maintaining the opacity of the pliers. To improve the composition for the eyes area I played around several times, planning to cut the upper face areas into little pieces and scattered around the photo, but was too messy so instead settled on the current way of presentation. Chose green for the eyes so that there come focus could be place there as well and green is a nice color to complement the red lips.

Class Critique:
- Need shadows
- Can try distorting one of the eyes to play around with the proportion
- Distort the mouth too because there is alot of details in the mouth
- Change the tone of the background, to show depth i.e. orange/warm foreground & blue/cold background

So taking into consideration all the comments:



Photos used: