Assignment 1: Group's Selection and Class Critique
Published Saturday, August 23, 2008 by Pei inForm
Class Critique:
- Leaf feels more like texture than form
- Need to take leaf from a different angle that don't look so flat
- Marker's focus is not in the middle, rather distracting
- Need to drop the colors; the key to taking form photos are the monotonic colors and emphasis on gradient
Line
Class Critique
- Interesting angle for the trees picture: diagonal lines give the impression of action and yet everyone knows that trees are stationary
- Rather flat photo of the roots
Color
Class Critique:
- Use complementary colors to bring out the idea i.e. red's complementary color is green
- Do a close up on a section of the bunch of flowers
- Present a narrower view to enhance the idea
- Construction photo reflects more of form than color
Texture
Class Critique:
- Nice photo, with the slight reveal of the background
- Able to turn bark into a form with the appropriate lighting
- Need to do a close up on the soil/logs
Shape 
Class Critique;
- (Aircon Duct) Straightforward and nice photo, but
- The angle is tilted inwards
- Nice try for silhouette; can try to do a close up on one of the leaves instead or take the silhouette of the whole tree
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